I like how you explained about the parts in the story you were talking about well.
I like how long you made your essay and your claim, but next time can you speak a little louder. Thanks!
very discricptive claim.I disagree that the dad was drifting away from the family. I think it is only the kid that the dad is drifting away
I like how you explained about the parts in the story you were talking about well.
ReplyDeleteI like how long you made your essay and your claim, but next time can you speak a little louder. Thanks!
ReplyDeletevery discricptive claim.
ReplyDeleteI disagree that the dad was drifting away from the family. I think it is only the kid that the dad is drifting away